This architectural design course deals with design development and detailing of a design problem introduced at the beginning of the semester. The class will focus on an interior renovation of an existing building. ARCH 3511 addresses the next level of design after schematic design: design development.
great rederings!...Your diagra board is a little hard to follow. Be a little more explicit when showing diagrams. These things are important if you are going to show it.
thanks i did it like that because i wanted to explain how many containers i used but it was more of a full explanation on that matter. but yes thanks i will do it better.
You are missing room names on your floor plans. I have one comment about your design.Seeing as it is a house for two chefs i felt that your kitchen should be a little more larger. Imagine both of the chef cooking in that kitchen which i presume is a 8' container with appliances on both sides.
well the room names i didn't wanted to put them because i think the spaces are self explanatory, and i didn't wanted to be repetitive by reassuring what the space is, and since there is not much in the spaces their are easy to follow and i made this stronger by adding the #d floor plans. about the the kitchen thanks and yes thanks and its true there should be more working space and i should of maximize the circulation in that area. thanks for the advice.
Avoid background images on your boards but if you decide to use them then i recommend using a drop shadow effect to make your images pop out of the background. Nice renderings
Great renderings. I really like your 3D floor plans. I agree with Marlon, your kitchen should have be a bit larger. I like how you placed the dining table displaying the open kitchen great job.
thanks and i intended to be honest in the kitchen making it open thanks. and about the containers yes more circulation would be better for the working space.
Really good renderings and floor plans. Presentation is well thought out. Like Marlon said, the kitchen space looks a bit too narrow for 2 chefs to work in and floor plans could use room names.
Well, the project as you know its really good, i would say that the facade need a little more color like a dark gray tone concrete or something like that, the porjevt itself is very complex and the facade make's it to simple, so i think by using different tone aterial would help give the complexity that the project already have..... But away very nice renderings and floor plans!!!!
thanks but my design as i said at the beginning would be something like the houses from the past, where they focus on the exterior and the interior was an afterthought and was simple and not functional. but ii decided to keep it monolithic on the outside and simple and work on the inside and make it flow and flow itself. and yes i cold and should of have done the facade more complex or more catchy. thanks for the advice. im really gonna implemented later on.
There is a lot here to look at. It is interesting that you show both the rendered bird eye plans and plan 2D plans. The 2D plans are very minimal compared to your other drawings. I would suggest adding color to these drawings and omitting the birds eye drawings as they are hard to read. Your project reads better through the rendered images of the various spaces. Your drawings should be organized to be the same layout (or similar) on each board. If you always kept your floorplans on the upper right of each board it would be easier to follow.
The rednerings of your project are just amazing! i think that the presentation needs some more organization... theres a few things i fdont egt. like the blue box in the site analysis... or the bubbles with the name of each baord. i also like the fact that the house feels more private form the outsied, and very comfortable in the inside.
great rederings!...Your diagra board is a little hard to follow. Be a little more explicit when showing diagrams. These things are important if you are going to show it.
ReplyDeletethanks i did it like that because i wanted to explain how many containers i used but it was more of a full explanation on that matter. but yes thanks i will do it better.
DeleteYou are missing room names on your floor plans. I have one comment about your design.Seeing as it is a house for two chefs i felt that your kitchen should be a little more larger. Imagine both of the chef cooking in that kitchen which i presume is a 8' container with appliances on both sides.
ReplyDeletewell the room names i didn't wanted to put them because i think the spaces are self explanatory, and i didn't wanted to be repetitive by reassuring what the space is, and since there is not much in the spaces their are easy to follow and i made this stronger by adding the #d floor plans. about the the kitchen thanks and yes thanks and its true there should be more working space and i should of maximize the circulation in that area. thanks for the advice.
DeleteAvoid background images on your boards but if you decide to use them then i recommend using a drop shadow effect to make your images pop out of the background. Nice renderings
ReplyDeleteyes makes sense and will make the images stronger thanks.
DeleteGreat renderings. I really like your 3D floor plans. I agree with Marlon, your kitchen should have be a bit larger. I like how you placed the dining table displaying the open kitchen great job.
ReplyDeletethanks and i intended to be honest in the kitchen making it open thanks. and about the containers yes more circulation would be better for the working space.
DeleteReally good renderings and floor plans. Presentation is well thought out. Like Marlon said, the kitchen space looks a bit too narrow for 2 chefs to work in and floor plans could use room names.
ReplyDeletethanks bro. yes more circulation is better.
DeleteWell, the project as you know its really good, i would say that the facade need a little more color like a dark gray tone concrete or something like that, the porjevt itself is very complex and the facade make's it to simple, so i think by using different tone aterial would help give the complexity that the project already have..... But away very nice renderings and floor plans!!!!
ReplyDeletethanks but my design as i said at the beginning would be something like the houses from the past, where they focus on the exterior and the interior was an afterthought and was simple and not functional. but ii decided to keep it monolithic on the outside and simple and work on the inside and make it flow and flow itself. and yes i cold and should of have done the facade more complex or more catchy. thanks for the advice. im really gonna implemented later on.
DeleteI like your perspectives. The last one is really dark though
ReplyDeletethanks.
DeleteVery nice presentation, i just think you should add some color to your floor plans.
ReplyDeleteyes i noticed the same thing but it was late i thing ill do it later and update the plans.
DeleteThere is a lot here to look at. It is interesting that you show both the rendered bird eye plans and plan 2D plans. The 2D plans are very minimal compared to your other drawings. I would suggest adding color to these drawings and omitting the birds eye drawings as they are hard to read. Your project reads better through the rendered images of the various spaces.
ReplyDeleteYour drawings should be organized to be the same layout (or similar) on each board. If you always kept your floorplans on the upper right of each board it would be easier to follow.
The rednerings of your project are just amazing! i think that the presentation needs some more organization... theres a few things i fdont egt. like the blue box in the site analysis... or the bubbles with the name of each baord. i also like the fact that the house feels more private form the outsied, and very comfortable in the inside.
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