This architectural design course deals with design development and detailing of a design problem introduced at the beginning of the semester. The class will focus on an interior renovation of an existing building. ARCH 3511 addresses the next level of design after schematic design: design development.
Try to align everything (especially images) It makes it difficult to follow along when things looks too much like a collage. Never overlap images, you're giving heirarchy to what is most important and what isn't important at all.
ok amigo i will take it in consideration, i wanted to convey the "explosion" of my containers and potray it on my presentation, so that it would carry that concept on. thnx
Love your aggressive move with your containers. You missing text on your floor plans. Bathroom needs all the elevations. For the first floor plan isn't the site suppose to be straight?
thnx mr cox! you know how tough it was to get those things the way i wanted it hahaha, i wasnt sure about the floor plans, so i just made the floor plan straight and let the site be a secondary part, as i wanted people to focus on the floor plan rather than the site itself.. thnx amigo
Really liked your container design and your presentation reads really well. Only issues are the bathroom and kitchen boards, they need to be more organized with the plans in the middle instead of on the sides. but overall, great project.
I think this is a very complex project especially in the way you using the geometry, I think that if you use light color for the floor plans it would make it easier to read, The section came out really good!!!
This is one of the most dynamic projects in our class this semester. It reads nicely in section, but the floorplans are too dark - perhaps use transparency to reduce the value of he colors. The renderings are also a bit too dark. There is a cellar that is never shown - should be in your sections and there should be a floorplan. Mechanical room?? In your section the earth should be poched to show a clear idea what is above and below ground.
the bathroom board is a bit to cluster. but nice work
ReplyDeletethnx arthur!!! i will work on it :D
Deleteadding color to the bathroom could make it easier to see more
ReplyDeletethnx for the comemnt man i actually did it but i forgot to update my file hahaha
DeleteTry to align everything (especially images) It makes it difficult to follow along when things looks too much like a collage. Never overlap images, you're giving heirarchy to what is most important and what isn't important at all.
ReplyDeleteok amigo i will take it in consideration, i wanted to convey the "explosion" of my containers and potray it on my presentation, so that it would carry that concept on. thnx
DeleteLove your aggressive move with your containers. You missing text on your floor plans. Bathroom needs all the elevations. For the first floor plan isn't the site suppose to be straight?
ReplyDeletethnx mr cox! you know how tough it was to get those things the way i wanted it hahaha, i wasnt sure about the floor plans, so i just made the floor plan straight and let the site be a secondary part, as i wanted people to focus on the floor plan rather than the site itself.. thnx amigo
DeleteAlignment is the key to a good layout. Cool Sections
ReplyDeleteI like your elevations. To me it feels like the house is powerful like the opera singers voice, it almost has a movement to it too.
ReplyDeletePut some scale figures to emphasis the massive feel of your model.
ReplyDeleteReally liked your container design and your presentation reads really well. Only issues are the bathroom and kitchen boards, they need to be more organized with the plans in the middle instead of on the sides. but overall, great project.
ReplyDeleteI think this is a very complex project especially in the way you using the geometry, I think that if you use light color for the floor plans it would make it easier to read, The section came out really good!!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the shifts. It's dynamic!
ReplyDeleteThough the elevations where very nice, but for the bathroom sheet you shouldn't overlap pictures can be a little hard to read.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the most dynamic projects in our class this semester. It reads nicely in section, but the floorplans are too dark - perhaps use transparency to reduce the value of he colors. The renderings are also a bit too dark.
ReplyDeleteThere is a cellar that is never shown - should be in your sections and there should be a floorplan. Mechanical room??
In your section the earth should be poched to show a clear idea what is above and below ground.
People in your elevations and sections.