This architectural design course deals with design development and detailing of a design problem introduced at the beginning of the semester. The class will focus on an interior renovation of an existing building. ARCH 3511 addresses the next level of design after schematic design: design development.
Increse the size of what you are showing....for example, your RCP's. Your Keys are too small to read. It makes it difficult to know what type of light goes where.
The colors are too bright. Try using more muted colors so that people can concentrate on the design not the bright colorful image. The bathroom and Kitchen drawings need tone/color to show the tiling and materials. RCPS are easy to read and follow. A variety of lights represent the uses. Missing physical model and sections. Plans are very organized and the layout works very well for your family. The exterior elevations are strong and represent the uses inside the building.
needs a little bit more color.
ReplyDeletesome colors on floor plan are too bright
ReplyDeleteIncrese the size of what you are showing....for example, your RCP's. Your Keys are too small to read. It makes it difficult to know what type of light goes where.
ReplyDeleteA little bit of color on your interior elevations will help it punch out a bit and give us some ideas of tonal quality.
ReplyDeleteKitchen drawings are too light increase lineweight
ReplyDeletesome color to your kitchen design would have be great to help see what your really want to express.
ReplyDeleteRender the kitchen and the bathroom, also add a background.
ReplyDeleteAdding color to the bathroom and kitchen designs would make it pop out more and RCPs are a little hard to read. Like your exterior rendering.
ReplyDeleteI think that if you alaing you images would make it easier to read, its kind of confusing
ReplyDeleteGreat work. I'm sure if you had more colors it would be even greater. I know time is never our friend ha,ha,ha
ReplyDeleteThe coloring on the floor plans are a little too dominant over the drawing.
ReplyDeleteThe colors are too bright. Try using more muted colors so that people can concentrate on the design not the bright colorful image. The bathroom and Kitchen drawings need tone/color to show the tiling and materials.
ReplyDeleteRCPS are easy to read and follow. A variety of lights represent the uses.
Missing physical model and sections.
Plans are very organized and the layout works very well for your family.
The exterior elevations are strong and represent the uses inside the building.