This architectural design course deals with design development and detailing of a design problem introduced at the beginning of the semester. The class will focus on an interior renovation of an existing building. ARCH 3511 addresses the next level of design after schematic design: design development.
sections and floor plans are done well. Great idea with the way your arranged your windows. Horizontal windows represents movement. I never thought of that. Good idea.
Align your images. Try to not have things scattered. Everything has its place.
Yeah i love the windows also. The room names are missing. I love your consistency with the colors. For your bathroom you could have changed the opacity of the images so that it doesn't clash with the plans.
This presentation is much better as the tones are more uniform than previously during class. The elevations and sections are easy to read and understand. The sections would read better if they had the earth darkened or poched. The model is very clean - but your images of it poor quality - things in the background. The floorplans are easy to read - but the images of the materials and furniture are too big and take away from your plans. RCP - lights should somehow be labeled as I do not know which lights go where in your plans.
the design of the windows iws great. i think it gives the house a better sense of movement. i think it would also be nice if you show any type of material used for the flooring and the elevations.
sections and floor plans are done well. Great idea with the way your arranged your windows. Horizontal windows represents movement. I never thought of that. Good idea.
ReplyDeleteAlign your images. Try to not have things scattered. Everything has its place.
Yeah i love the windows also. The room names are missing. I love your consistency with the colors. For your bathroom you could have changed the opacity of the images so that it doesn't clash with the plans.
ReplyDeleteGreat drawings. Alignment and consistent spacing between images is crucial to the layout
ReplyDeleteSome of the colors on your plan are really dark.
ReplyDeleteYou should add some color to the massings to show what the containers represent.
ReplyDeleteThis presentation is much better as the tones are more uniform than previously during class. The elevations and sections are easy to read and understand. The sections would read better if they had the earth darkened or poched. The model is very clean - but your images of it poor quality - things in the background.
ReplyDeleteThe floorplans are easy to read - but the images of the materials and furniture are too big and take away from your plans.
RCP - lights should somehow be labeled as I do not know which lights go where in your plans.
the design of the windows iws great. i think it gives the house a better sense of movement. i think it would also be nice if you show any type of material used for the flooring and the elevations.
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